What do you think of this cover for Fractured Heart?

Now that the art commission I asked of the wonderful Tiago Alexandre (his portfolio is here: https://www.artstation.com/talexior ) is finished, I have started playing around with title font types, colors, and positioning to turn it into (one of) the covers for Fractured Heart. What do you think? Is this readable but not boring? Do you have suggested changes for me to try? Please let me know 😀

If you’d like to read the story of the shy, sulky, emotionally traumatized EDM DJ Theo and his enemies-to-friends-to-lovers relationship with the arrogant, funny and flirtatious world-famous pop star Lysander, you can read the first eight chapters for free here! www.fracturedheart.net/chapters/ch1-8-preview

Then if you like the story, you can read an entire 3-5k word chapter every Friday for only $5 a month (for a total of four chapters each month) on Patreon!

As-Intended “adults only” version: patreon.com/fracturedheartAO

Sanitized “SFW” version: patreon.com/fracturedheart

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